Yeah, there's some MAC connection here, but I'm mostly bragging up Shawnee.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...mment-area

Note: I'm not responsible for the terrible writing of this author. Ugh.

(08-09-2012 09:50 AM)DrTorch Wrote:  Yeah, there's some MAC connection here, but I'm mostly bragging up The University of Toledo.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...mment-area

Note: I'm not responsible for the terrible writing of this author. Ugh.

Thanks- we appreciate it! But seriously I didn't think the writing was bad. When I pair it with two other articles I read today it looks OK. I guess that was preferable to saying "Hoop was in a threesome with two other golfers".

(08-09-2012 12:16 PM)H2Oville Rocket Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 09:50 AM)DrTorch Wrote:  Yeah, there's some MAC connection here, but I'm mostly bragging up The University of Toledo.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...mment-area

Note: I'm not responsible for the terrible writing of this author. Ugh.

Thanks- we appreciate it! But seriously I didn't think the writing was bad. When I pair it with two other articles I read today it looks OK. I guess that was preferable to saying "Hoop was in a threesome with two other golfers".

But you don't introduce the article referencing their HS careers, then only clarify that with an addendum in the last paragraph.

(08-09-2012 05:17 PM)DrTorch Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 12:16 PM)H2Oville Rocket Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 09:50 AM)DrTorch Wrote:  Yeah, there's some MAC connection here, but I'm mostly bragging up The University of Toledo.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...mment-area

Note: I'm not responsible for the terrible writing of this author. Ugh.

Thanks- we appreciate it! But seriously I didn't think the writing was bad. When I pair it with two other articles I read today it looks OK. I guess that was preferable to saying "Hoop was in a threesome with two other golfers".

But you don't introduce the article referencing their HS careers, then only clarify that with an addendum in the last paragraph.

I don't do just about anything he does, writing -wise. But then I had an excellent HS education.

Damn, I thought you were posting pictures of Natalie Gulbis.

(08-09-2012 11:12 PM)H2Oville Rocket Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 05:17 PM)DrTorch Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 12:16 PM)H2Oville Rocket Wrote:  

(08-09-2012 09:50 AM)DrTorch Wrote:  Yeah, there's some MAC connection here, but I'm mostly bragging up The University of Toledo.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...mment-area

Note: I'm not responsible for the terrible writing of this author. Ugh.

Thanks- we appreciate it! But seriously I didn't think the writing was bad. When I pair it with two other articles I read today it looks OK. I guess that was preferable to saying "Hoop was in a threesome with two other golfers".

But you don't introduce the article referencing their HS careers, then only clarify that with an addendum in the last paragraph.

I don't do just about anything he does, writing -wise. But then I had an excellent HS education.

Touche.

http://www.limaohio.com/sports/local/art...0f31a.html

With a much better writer covering the story.